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i have a sadness so complete
i've mistook it for calm.
i have to breathe in and
breathe out all at once
just to keep myself together
after all
i've got a lot'a life left to go.
i've mistook it for calm.
i have to breathe in and
breathe out all at once
just to keep myself together
after all
i've got a lot'a life left to go.
i might not make it without you.
edit- added an extra line to tie in the last one.
take me home- jack savoretti
edit- added an extra line to tie in the last one.
take me home- jack savoretti
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uhm... I hope you're the person who originally posted this ([link]), or the person who originally made this because if not, your poem might have just been stolen?